I wonder if it is possible to write a blog about writing without covering grammar at some point. Until such a time comes, I have devoted the Everything About English section of the Wordsmith on the standard rules for constructing sentences into meaningful prose. What better way to begin than with a concept I've always struggled with?
Of the following sentences, which would you be more
likely to use in speech, writing, or both?
Sentence 1: I
object to him singing at twelve o’clock in the morning
Sentence 2: I
object to his singing at twelve o’clock in the morning
What
is the difference between the two sentences? When the letter combination “-ing”
is added to the end of a verb, the word can act as a noun, a verb, or an adjective.
When used as a noun, like in the previous sentences, the created noun is called
a gerund, in all other cases it is
called a participle.
The participle as an adjective: I’m a traveling salesman
The participle as a verb: I’m cooking these eggs
The participle as a noun (gerund): I enjoy singing as a hobby
In
the first two sentences, the verb to
sing should be acting as a gerund, because it is the late-night activity that the
person has a problem with. Since the pronoun him in Sentence 1 is not possessive, the idea is that the person
objects to the gentleman who happens to be singing, not to the singing
itself. When you place a non-possessive pronoun before a gerund, thereby making
it a participle, you create what H.W. Fowler called a fused participle. This is
easily corrected by you changing the non-possessive pronoun to a possessive
pronoun (him to his), or by your changing the syntax of the sentence (if the
possessive sounds strange).
Activities:
1 Find
and correct the fused participles in the following:
Me
sitting by the door doesn’t bother anybody
I hate that man being ripped off like that
I hate that man being ripped off like that
I wonder if Sam’s singing is good enough for Broadway
I don’t mind you using my iPhone
I loathe them dancing while I’m thinking
I question the speaker’s understanding of grammar
Now that you have mastered this lesson, do you know how
many fused participles were in this post all together?
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