Friday, March 29, 2013

Introducing a New Topic

         After writing several posts about fiction writing, I have decided to illustrate what I've been teaching with fiction of my own.  As always, any comments or suggestions for improvement are welcome.


         With that said, meet Adam Tipper . . .
This picture (self-drawn) is the reason why this is not a blog about drawing ;-)
        . . . who will be starring in my first blog short story, Whether You Want to or Not




            Aaron yanked on the Craftsman mower cord a fourth time, sending a breath of white smoke into the oven-like May air. The mower chugged to life. His dad was right, maybe taking his shirt off and wearing old jeans really worked. Aaron grinned, dreaming of the cool Pepsi waiting for him after the front yard grass was mowed. He threw his shoulders forward and marched, driving the mower over the wet lawn.

            "Straight lines along the perimeter moving towards the middle," Aaron reminded himself. Mr. Tipper had made it clear that the lawn was to be finished by the time he got home if Aaron was going to get his five dollars for the job. Also, if this job went well, who knows whether there’d be a future five dollars?

            The mower jumped. Six geysers erupted under Aaron’s feet. Cold water shot up his pant legs and sprayed his bare stomach as he Riverdanced sopping and surprised off the lawn. With a lunge, he sprang off the lawn towards the blue house behind him. Aaron ran to the right of the automatic garage door and slapped the faucet handle, turning the water off. 

His younger sister Kelly walked up from around the house behind him, wearing a water-stained t-shirt and carrying a nozzled garden hose in her hand. “What happened to the water?” she asked, eyeing her brother suspiciously.

“I must’ve ran over it,” said Aaron, “why didn’t you check to make sure your hose wasn’t on the grass before I started mowing?”

“Hey, don’t bark at me,” said Kelly, raising her hands defensively, “the windows are on the side of the house and I’ve been out here for an hour. How was I supposed to know when you were mowing?”

“What, the sound brrrr wasn’t enough for you?”

Kelly tapped her earbud with her left index finger.

Aaron grumbled. She had a point, and nobody had mentioned that it was more of Aaron’s fault for not double-checking that the lawn was free of sticks. Or hoses.

“Well, I guess this means I don’t have to finish the windows now,” Kelly flicked the hose over her shoulder and flip-flopped to the house.

Aaron tensed. The last time his mistake had gotten Kelly out of work, Mr. Tipper gave them both extra work and Kelly never let him forget it. Besides, Aaron had five bucks at stake. He shook his head. “I don’t think so, missy. I’ll fix it.”

“You can’t fix a hose, Aaron,” she said, coming back. “Besides, Dad should be on his way home now. I can call and ask him to pick one up on his way.”

“And waste fourteen bucks? No sir. Besides, when you make a mess, you clean it up on your own.” armed with this, Aaron scoured the garage for the Tipper’ year supply of duct tape.

 Hours passed. 

When wrapping the duct tape four times around the break couldn’t keep the water in, Aaron tried a fresh roll of tape. When that failed, Aaron turned to a pair of scissors and some old hose connectors. With each failure, a new tool was pitched into the garage and the hose grew less likely to be used again. Finally, with a garden hose that resembled a butchered python, Aaron knew the end had come. He snatched up coils of the green rubber and pitched it into the garbage can. It landed in, sending a bang into the air. Aaron sighed at his failed effort. He had tried on his own and failed, leaving him no choice.

Aaron marched into the house. Hopefully his dad had fourteen bucks on him and wouldn’t mind taking a detour on his way home.
 

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